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User ID: 8,426
Registered: 10th Jan 2012
Last Seen: 13m, 37s ago
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Greetings, my name is Souldin, known also as Review King Souldin, and I welcome you to my profile page.

Age: 20/800,000,000,007 years old.

Gender: Male

Country: UK (England)

Likes: Tea, Pizza, Video Games, Writing, Walks, Animals, History, Philosophy.

I feel it is also appropriate that, as this is a fan site for the cartoon, I fill you in on my tastes for certain aspects of My Little Pony.

Favourite MLP:FiM Characters: Twilight Sparkle, Scootaloo, Angel Bunny, Spike, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy.

Favourite MLP:FiM Episodes: S2E14 - The Last Roundup, S2E22 - Hurricane Fluttershy, S2E15 - The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000, S1E8 - Look Before You Sleep, S1E19 - A Dog and Pony Show, S2E5 - Sisterhooves Social.

Favourite MLP:FiM Songs: Find a Pet Song, This Day Aria, Raise This Barn, Art of the Dress, The Flim Flam Brothers Song, Winter Wrap Up.

Favourite MLP:FiM Pairings/Shippings: FlutterDash, SpArity, SoarJack, TwiPie, SweetieSpike, RariPie.

Favourite G3 Character: Starsong.

Favourite G3 Episode: Starsong’s Dance and Sing Party.

Oh my gosh! Information, glorious information! This week we have been flooded with so much new information that it's been truly terrific. We got a trailer and plenty of screenshots, a little more could have been detailed but with how little we've so far had I appreciate what we've received. Of course I'm sure you want to know my thoughts on it and I'll be glad to tell you. Well, I love all I've seen... of Pokémon X and Y.

As of the moment, you see that little yellow lizard. Well it's an electric/normal type who powers itself via sunlight and has an electric move that heals and does damage. Its name is Helioptile, which is stupidly hard to say but I'm probably going to have one in my squad and I will naming it Tanner. Also, because it is obligatory now that we have robin Pokémon, the following picture must be posted.

Now, I'm sure there was something else that came out recently, something really important... meh; I'll remember it for a later blog. Let's move onto fanfiction progress folks.

Fanfiction Progression

Progress on Promotion has been going slowly but I've been organising how I'm to write it quite well. Instead of writing all of the scenes in order I think it would be better to finish all of the shorter scenes, including the one at the end, and then write the longest scene of the fanfic that is most likely to take up the most time. As they are shorter scenes with only a handful of characters playing a part in each of them, whereas the largest scene has all of the assist trophies involved, my understanding of how everything plays out and the exchanges of dialogue is clearer. So if all goes well then by the end of the next week I can all but the large scene finished, and thus devotes all my focus towards it. The best factor to timing, though perhaps not to quality, is that I lack a proof-reader for the Super Smash Bros fandom and thus I won't have to worry so much about how long a proof-reader will take with it. Besides, any major errors or flaws will be pointed out by readers and I will quickly fix them up.

Progress on Promotion is probably not what you want to hear from me. Oh I know what to hear me say. Out of the blue a fanfic has appeared, written by my hand and one I have never mentioned before. What gives? Did I forget to mention this story before, or simply withheld information on it in order to surprise you? The answer may surprise you, as this new fanfic, Fluttershy the Cheerleader, has something in common with the greatest fanfic I've ever written Dull and Dulling (on that note if you are to read any of my non pony fanfics I do advice Dull and Dulling, best story idea I've had). The thing they have in common... they were both written in a single day.

To explain how I came to write Fluttershy the Cheerleader, let me inform you of the Flutterdash groups FlutterDash Prompt Tag (For the FlutterDash Group Collab), a wonderful little thing FlutterDash-er Jake Roberts organised (yes, we are talking about the same Jake Roberts who supports AppleDash, it is weird seeing significant contributions from shippers that also support rival ships towards the very thing they are significantly contributing towards). Anyway, the way the FlutterDash Group Collab works is that someone suggests a prompt on the FlutterDash Prompt Tag thread (say midnight or tea, and then use that as a theme), someone lays a claim to that prompt and writes a short 100-500 word FlutterDash fanfic for it. It's a wonderful idea but one I have little time for, I'm busy with work, busy with SSB fanfiction, and hope to swing back into reviewing soon. Also most of the prompts weren’t appealing to me until one day the prompt 'cheering' was put forth. I've brainstormed previously an idea centring on Fluttershy cheering for Rainbow Dash, and so decided I should claim this prompt and write a short story for it. Then Flutterguy89 snatched it up before me. He goes onto the revenge list now. Well this bothered me, I had gotten all excited for writing this short story and the idea wouldn't rest. I happened to have the day off the next day and thus decided to just write my prompt idea for cheering as a longer, standalone one-shot.

Something you will sadly never see is the witty banter and exchange of FlutterDash ideas that NintendoGal and I share with one another over Skype. In one of these exchanges the subject of Equestria Girls was brought up and from there whether or not the animators and writers will continue to ship FlutterDash (with season 2 you know they do). This sprung forth an idea from me of a tale of Rainbow Dash dressing Fluttershy up as a cheerleader to help her practise with the problem arising that Rainbow Dash was having a hard time keeping her eyes off Fluttershy. So when I saw the 'cheering' prompt this idea sprung to mind. I simply thought of a shorter pony version towards it. Even with the fanfic now being longer than the 500 word cap, it is still best described as a funny, short and sweet fanfic, and has kept the pony aspect to it.

The initial idea of humanised Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, was changed to a pony 500 word prompt, and the back to a short story albeit with ponies being ponies. I won't go into some of my ideas for the human version but the prompt version can be effectively summed up as the opening paragraph combined with the last scene of the fanfic. It would have started with Rainbow Dash musing over the reason she had crash landed, describing cheerleader Fluttershy, explaining why Fluttershy is dressed (in Rainbow's thoughts and not a scene switch), and then ending with Fluttershy taking care of Rainbow. The idea on how to expand it started with simply showcasing Fluttershy dressing up as a cheerleader, as well as showing Fluttershy's improved cheerleader cheers for Rainbow Dash. Then I wanted to add in the opening part where Rainbow Dash gets the idea, and then I thought of both the measurement joke and role-playing joke so Rarity made her way into the story. Simple, but that's how things expanded after having been altered and cut down.

The title has changed quite a bit during it's creation and even now as it has been uploaded I am not satisfied with it's name. Other title ideas included the original 'A Cute Cheerleader Proves Distracting', 'Cheering!', 'Crash and Burn', 'Rainbow Dash's Cheerleader', and 'Cute Distracting Cheers' but in the end I went with Rated's suggestion of Fluttershy the Cheerleader, a title also approved by my younger brother because it was the least creepy and/or weird (when I told him the plot involved Rainbow Dash dressing Fluttershy as a cheerleader his suggestion for a title was 'Rainbow Creep'... I for some reason chose not to use this title).

My final comments to the fanfic then go towards Rated PonyStar, whom I thank very much. When I decided to write this fanfic and realised I could get it uploaded before I even once mentioned it in my fanfiction progress I decided I should make it a surprise treat for my readers. It was Wednesday evening and I wanted someone who could proof-read the fanfic in less than two days. I imagined the ever busy Ugugg would reply to my short notice request with a response fitting his raging avatar and collection of flipping table gifs so I went to collage finished Rated PonyStar. His proof-reading and suggestion of the Rainbow chanting about Fluttershy scene really helped and I truly appreciate the great work he put in, especially given such short notice. A round of applause for Rated PonyStar everyone.

Main Article

This blog post is long enough as it is so I shall skip out on a main topic for this week. It's a shame too; I had such a brilliant thing planned as well. Actually, giving you guys a week notice in advance to think up ideas for my upcoming interactive post might be a swell thing to do. So I shall. I will ask this question now to ready your answers for it next week, so without further ado next week's blog post will cover the topic of...

"How would you design a My Little Pony Trading Card Game?"

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Fluttershy the Cheerleader.

Fluttershy is always willing to come and cheer Rainbow Dash on, be it for flight competitions, races, or even practise sessions. Unfortunately Fluttershy’s cheering leaves a lot to be desired. Rainbow Dash however has come up with a solution to this problem; dress Fluttershy up as a cheerleader.

The cover image has no name as far as I’m aware but was drawn by the artist Yubi.

Unsurprisingly this fanfic features FlutterDash shipping.

I do not - nor do I claim to - own any characters or artwork I use in this story unless otherwise stated - they belong to their respective series and owners.

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Magnetism!

When sorting through a horde of ancient artefacts Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash accidentally activate the magical powers of a pair of bracelets which force the wearers to be in constant physical contact with one another. Stuck together until Twilight manages to find a way to remove the bracelets, the shy and timid pegasus must cope with re-emerging feelings, while the athletic and rash pegasus must cope with the various antics of a bunny rabbit out to get her.

The cover image for this story is the artwork ‘FlutterDash RainbowShy IDK’ by TheDracoJayProduct.

This fanfic features FlutterDash and hints/mentions other pairings such as SpArity, RariPie, and SweetieSpike to a lesser degree.

I do not - nor do I claim to - own any characters or artwork I use in this story unless otherwise stated - they belong to their respective series and owners.

Now with a fan-made TV Tropes page created and maintained by Zyr1987 because readers of this story consider this to be that awesome.

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Open to Interpretation!

During the Mane 6’s battle against the changelings Rarity witnesses a moment between two of her friends that implies that they are more than just friends, and after the royal Canterlot wedding draws to a close, decides to inform the other members of the Mane 6. Disagreements arise as the four pony’s debate on both the reason for this moment between two of their friends and whether it actually occurred at all and so they begin to discuss their own interpretations of the event Rarity believes she saw.

In this fanfic there are hints of TwiPie, mentions of SpArity, and both hints and mentions of FlutterDash.

I do not - nor do I claim to - own any characters or artwork I use in this story - they belong to their respective series and owners.

If you enjoyed Open to Interpretation then I suggest you also read its companion story, Snuggles and Nibbles by NintendoGal55.

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Thank You Cider!

Fluttershy often dreams of being able to cuddle up with the pony who means more to her than a friend. When said crush comes barging through the window one very early morning, is her wish about to come true? FlutterDash.

While this is not my first fanfic this is my first time uploading one to this site and so, if there are any errors regarding the structure then it is more than likely due to my unfamiliarity with this site and its uploading system. Although this is my first Friendship is Magic fanfic I welcome any and all criticism, which will make me just as happy to receive as it would praise.

The method of writing this short story involves connecting various fan arts and creating a narrative which involves each one of them. As such I wish to credit the artworks of DiegoTan's 'Rainbow Dash n Fluttershy hug', Strebiskunk's 'Bedshy' (which also serves as the cover image), Miokomata's 'Gotcha' and 'Best night ever', Haileyguilford's 'Morning', Juicy Cactus's 'Your real Christmas present', and Fajeh's 'Flutterdash' as sources of inspiration for this fanfic.

I do not - nor do I claim to - own any characters or artwork I use in this story - they belong to their respective series and owners.

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Comments

#466980 · 2w, 18h ago · 1 · ·
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As you can probably tell I do not use my profile page comments application all that much and yet I have a comments here that probably deserve a response. Sorry for the long wait those of you expecting a reply but here I go;

>>279014 Thanks for praising my user page, I put a lot of work organising it and ensuring there is a new blog post each week. :twilightsmile:

>>328824 You're rewriting Dragons and Diamonds? :pinkiehappy: Well then please do inform me once you've finished the rewrite, the original was a wonderful little story and I'll eagerly await to see how you improve upon.

>>330080 Ah, the author of And then Twilight Exploded. No need to thank me, it was a delightful story (short, sweet, and hilarious :rainbowlaugh:) and if it weren't for Under the Aurora would have been my favourite season 3 based fanfic I've read.

>>455738 Pleasing to here. I was going to start replying to the comments on Kisses are Complicated but I shall await for your comment to pop up first. Glad to hear you enjoyed. :twilightsmile:

#455738 · 2w, 6d ago · · ·
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Wonderful new story! I'll be sure to post my thoughts on it tomorrow when I'm a bit more levelheaded. You should see what I did to my avatar over on MLP Forums after checking it out :)

http://mlpforums.com/user/8039-dashforever/

And no, my OTP hasn't changed. You and Rated aren't THAT good ;)

#453257 · 3w, 22h ago · · ·
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Holy, your blog posts have a lot of words.

Awesome story by the way.

Comment posted by FlanChan deleted at 2:09am on the 28th of February, 2013
#342601 · 12w, 15h ago · · ·
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Thanks for the favorite and plug on the forum of my story! Thank You Cider is one of the first stories I have read here and contributed greatly in my desire to write some stories of my own. Thanks again

#330080 · 13w, 1d ago · · ·
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Thank you kindly for the fave! I'm glad you enjoyed it... *Looks for your name... then realizes who you are* Oh... OH! Well then... I DOUBLY thank you for the fave then :pinkiehappy:

#328824 · 13w, 2d ago · · ·
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Notification: Souldin favourited your story.

Why does that name sound familiar...

*Checks profile page*

:pinkiegasp: Souldin fav'd my story!

Thanks for the fave for Dragons and Diamonds! I hope you enjoyed it, and will eventually enjoy the re-write... when I finish it...

#303053 · 15w, 4d ago · · ·
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Iguanas.

Thoughts?

#294005 · 16w, 2d ago · · ·
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Greetings once again my old nemesis. I was going art hunting a few minutes ago and would I be right in guessing that you've seen this picture? It's eerily similar to one of my favorite scenes in Magnetism

http://www.deviantart.com/morelikethis/304657699?offset=4176#/d4tamf3

On a side note, I've persuaded one of my friends to give Magnetism a go once he finishes his exams. He's even considering changing his username to FlutterDashForever XD. I think you'd get along :)

#286032 · 17w, 15h ago · · ·
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Then I go to your page and find you've also written two of my other favorite fics :derpyderp1:

THE AWESOME. SO AWESOME. :moustache:

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My Episode Ranking List

1) The Last Roundup – Fantastic (10)

2) Hurricane Fluttershy – Fantastic (10)

3) The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 – Fantastic (10)

4) Look Before You Sleep – Fantastic (10)

5) A Dog and Pony Show – Fantastic (10)

6) Sisterhooves Social – Fantastic (10)

7) Party of One – Fantastic (10)

8) Just for Sidekicks – Fantastic (10)

9) Over A Barrel – Fantastic (9.5)

10) Secret of my Excess – Fantastic (9.5)

11) It’s About Time – Fantastic (9.5)

12) Magic Duel – Fantastic (9.5)

13) The Show Stoppers – Fantastic (9.5)

14) May The Best Pet Win – Fantastic (9.5)

15) Hearts and Hooves Day – Fantastic (9.5)

16) A Canterlot Wedding Part 2 – Fantastic (9)

17) Green Isn’t Your Colour – Fantastic (9)

18) Apple Family Reunion – Fantastic (9)

19) Suited For Success – Fantastic (9)

20) Sweet and Elite – Fantastic (8.5)

21) Spike At Your Service – Fantastic (8.5)

22) Stare Master – Fantastic (8.5)

23) Sonic Rainboom – Fantastic (8.5)

24) Hearth’s Warming Eve – Fantastic (8.5)

25) Bridle Gossip – Fantastic (8)

[G3] Starsong’s Dance and Sing Party – Fantastic (8)

26) Winter Wrap Up – Fantastic (8)

27) Applebuck Season – Fantastic (8)

28) Too Many Pinkie Pie’s – Fantastic (8)

29) Swarm of the Century – Good (7.5)

30) Sleepless in Ponyville – Good (7.5)

31) A Bird in the Hoof – Good (7)

32) The Cutie Pox – Good (7)

33) Luna Eclipsed – Good (7)

34) The Ticket Master – Good (6.5)

[G3] A Charming Birthday – Good (6.5)

[G3]Friends are Never Far Away - Good (6.5)

35) Boast Busters – Good (6.5)

36) Dragon Quest – Good (6)

37) Feeling Pinkie Keen – Good (6)

38) Lesson Zero – Good (6)

39) A Friend in Deed – Good (6)

[G3] Sweetie Belle’s New Cake Party – Good (6)

40) Dragonshy – Good (6)

41) Baby Cakes – Good (6)

42) Wonderbolt Academy – Good (6)

43) Fall Weather Friends – Good (5.5)

44) Games Ponies Play – Good (5.5)

45) Call of the Cutie – Good (5.5)

46) Mare in the Moon – Average (5)

47) The Return of Harmony Part 2 – Average (5)

48) Elements of Harmony – Average (5)

49) The Return of Harmony Part 1 – Average (5)

50) The Crystal Empire Part 2 – Average (4.5)

51) MMMystery on the Friendship Express – Average (4.5)

[G3] Pinkie Pie’s Party Party – Average (4.5)

[G3] Scootaloo’s Outdoor Play Party – Average (4.5)

52) One Bad Apple – Average (4)

53) The Best Night Ever – Average (4)

54) Magical Mystery Cure – Average (4)

55) The Crystal Empire Part 1 – Average (4)

[G3} Toola-Roola’s Mixed-up Painting Party – Average (4)

56) The Cutie Mark Chronicles – Average (3.5)

57) A Canterlot Wedding Part 1 – Average (3.5)

[G3] Rainbow Dash’s Hat Fashion Party – Average (3.5)

58) Family Appreciation Day – Average (3.5)

59) Griffon The Brush Off – Average (3.5)

60) The Mysterious Mare Do Well – Average (3)

61) Keep Calm and Flutter On – Poor (2.5)

[G3] Dancing in the Clouds - Poor (2.5)

[G3] Starsong and the Magic Dancing Shoes – Poor (1.5)

62) Putting Your Hoof Down – Poor (1.5)

63) Read it and Weep – Poor (1)

64) Owl’s Well That Ends Well – Poor (1)

[G3] Cheerilee’s Pyjama Party – Poor (1)

65) Ponyville Confidential – Poor (0.5)